Saturday, 19 November 2016

The Dangerous Journey - personification



I asked my students to write five sentences to personify this mountain as part of our topic on 'The Dangerous Journey'. Here are some of the best:


The imposing Suila Grande in the Andes

'Its face cries waterfalls of avalanches' (Rebecca)
'It wears a white coat of snow' (Angus)
'The mountain has a cold heart who no one could love' (Toni)
'A cowardly bully that hides his face behind an icy white sheet' (Max)
'The mountain was a bully to the other mountain' (Mayyan)
'It covers its face with a layer of powder covering its true beauty' (Maram)
'She hid her molten core under her cold exterior away from the pain' (Fatma)
'The dangerous mountain fights off any humans who try to conquer her' (Emilia)
'The mountain is a backstabbing friend: friendly one day, trying to kill you the next' (Yusuf S)
'So lonely even the trees don't want to grow on him' (Giacomo)


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